Friday, April 3, 2009

SOUL MATES.............

Down the hill S went…..H followed

S like the dark clouds

H the rainbow behind them

‘I want to be you H’ said S

‘But why? Nobody would notice me, if not for you S

Together we are a roller coaster of emotions

So wherever you Sadness shall go, me Happiness shall follow’

My Second attempt at 55er. I am liking the attempt to say a lot with few words

A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:

• Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)

• A setting,

• One or more characters,

• Some conflict, and

• A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)

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Indyeah said...

beautiful again :)
I was wondering at H and S and then you revealed the names:)

liked it:)
you really are enjoying yourself with the 55ers arent you?:))

Solilo said...

Beautiful jugalbandi of S and H.

Indian Home Maker said...

Positive 55er! I like :)
And I thought first, even after seeing the photograph, it is about a and a woman.

Till now I have read and written mostly serious, even grim ones :)

Poonam J said...

Hi Indyeah...Yes am enjoying and when I get comments from you makes it worthwhile.

Thank you Solilo...I tried.

IHM...You have been the inspiration for these 55er.I read all yours and found them heart tugging, especially the second one.They were beautiful.

Just call me 'A' said...

ohhhh very nice...a very different take to the 55 fiction. I've been planning to do this for a while now but have never got down to it. It's throught sadness that happiness shine.